NEEEDS WORK
It's good, but it is missing a lot of percussion and BASS, will help a lot!!! the patterns are good though.
NEEEDS WORK
It's good, but it is missing a lot of percussion and BASS, will help a lot!!! the patterns are good though.
Thanks for the feedback! I'm working on a few tracks and I'll work on the percussion and bass.
WOW
Put this on youtube, and in a few days you will be hearing this on the radio... no joke.
It is on YouTube XD. I'm glad you enjoyed it though :P
Impressive
This is something to appreciate, as the bassline changes the mood while the synths and percussion perfectly play in the background.
I really like this :)
:D thanks alot for your review ! :)
well...
Good sound and rhythm, although the notes are off, which may sound good sometimes, they dont work very well here, but i will give it to you anyways.
Again good choice in percussion, but i think you didn't organize it very well interms of when to introduce it and at what volume.
I wasn't focusing on organizing in with effort. I just played with sounds and mashed them together to come up with something. Entertaining none the less. Thanks for your comment :)
hmmm
Well, unless you were trying to, you hit all the wrong notes (which surprises in the beginning), unique. i like what you did with the lower frequencies (nice bass) and the break beat. the break at around 1:48 is poor.
Well, those wrong notes. I can't do anything about them, sometimes when I play them they sound well, and sometimes they don't. That's the problem when your recording live.
And I'm glad you liked the bass. I've been searching for the right midi, and then I still had to modulate it... And about that break, if I didn't do it it would always be the same loop, and become too repetetive (or how the heck you say that in English).
Oh SNAP
This is very nice. Professional.
100% support, this song isn't boring, it is perfectly adjusted to have the right amount of time for every pattern.
What program do you use?
Fl Studio 9 :]
Interesting
Its good, just bring the volume of the low end sound (bass?) up a lot more, and reduce the volume of the snare and reduce the volume of the high hat by a bit.
I like what you did with that gong :)
Thanks for the input dude, I won't change this version now, but I'll certainly keep it in mind ready for my next piece- I'll admit I don't really attempt to mix the levels in my tracks, but I might as well start now :)
Something...
I can see this having a lot of potential, but the fact that you gave up on it and uploaded just makes your effort pointless. Like you mentioned "i couldn't be bothered adding another segment". I think if you completed this song and actually put effort into it, you will be happy with the outcome.
It's not really the fact that I "couldn't be bothered", it really means, "I hit that big ol' writers block". But still, its a 1:30 piece, there is a lot of short compositions up here on Newgrounds.
Plus, I didn't actually hear any critique on what you disliked in particular, no help for me there mate.
Wow
This sounds very much like progressive trance... i like it.
Here are a few things you may consider improving.
- The clap
- That really high pitched bass in the beginning, its a bit ugly.
Otherwise it is a masterpiece, LOTS of different sounds with very similar rhythms, hard to put together, makes a song very interesting, i really like it :)
Biggest PLUS is the fact that its long and not repetitive.
Thanks, but im not quite sure i know what you mean.
- What do i need to improve about the clap? I can change it, but i dont know if its better then.
- If you can tell me the time, i can change it.
If there is one thing i want in my songs, its not being repetitive. But i try to let it flow with the rest perfectly. So hearing this really makes me happy. Thank you.
I will try to improve what i think that you mean.
- Dragonarios
Love it
I like every bit of it... no complains, except the kick and snare, sound kind of old school. Although they work well with this song.
Thanks a ton dude!
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